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a second version of i'm not sure which i like better. Thoughts?

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:iconmisaniovent:
This is really sad.

Good though, I like it.

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Hide the past!
:iconhellsie:
I muchly like the first one better :nod: This one is great too, it just doesn't have the rhythm of the first. Great work! :w00t:

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[link] <--- My novel-in-progress
[link] <--- My piss-take on Bush
[link] <--- Edward Scissorhands, Warhol style
:iconellenjanuary:
in and out?
Sounds really... miserable.
Good job! :clap:

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:icontheguyinthebackgroun:
wow

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"Falling all over my self to lick your heart and taste your health"-Anthony Kedis
:iconlilcosette:
Thats beautiful, well written, I haven't read the other one.. is it still on your account? This is great. :aww:
:iconmonkeyslunch:
Your power with suggestion is formidable.
The thumb for the other version isn't showing up though.

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:iconstjoan:
how strange! thanks!

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