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Edit- i've decided to keep the ands after all...for the rolling building feeling...the heaping of muck...still needs tweaks. Edit again! WOW! A DD! Haha I'm really honored and very glad, to be honest this is perhaps one of my most favorite pieces i've ever put down. (ussually i'm not a fan of my poetry...irony) All poetry means something, and as artists we have to divorce ourselves from that meaning if we are to learn and grow and fix the piece. This piece i've rejoined the meaning of, and for once it has a truely important one for myself. It's dedicated to my mother and as can be read here: [link] The reason is: My sister died some years ago on the 26th of December, and I always felt like my mother wasn't given the proper means to really mourn her, this poem is a response to that and a piece of mourning in and of itself that let me, as her daughter, say goodbye to my sister in my own way, through the Jewish tradition. [link] --------------- Related Pieces: [link] Daily DeviationGiven 2007-01-30Shivah Baby by =StJoan is an atmospheric piece filled with insistent imagery and phrases. (Suggested by =jake10684 and Featured by `PoeticWar) Comments This is an amazing bit of writing. There's just one line I think is superfluous: "not long legs but the small and thin". Kinda breaks up the flow of that images. Love the casserole-torso. Good work.
-- LIT NEEDS SOUND Make A Noise About It Here hrmm perhaps, might be reworded or chucked hrmm.
thanks thanks thanks -- "The world is not enough- but it's such a perfect place to start" - Garbage - `roguewolf19 looks so Balla.  well, your inference to Shiva in the title would suggest that you're alluding to starvation somewhere, as would your chosen imagery.
Is this a play of east vs west views? -- Life is what we make it, and the world is what we make it. The eyes of the cheerful and of the melancholy man are fixed upon the same creation; but very different are the aspects which it bears to them. Albert Pike nah Shiv'ah- the jewish tradition of mourning
-- "The world is not enough- but it's such a perfect place to start" - Garbage - `roguewolf19 looks so Balla.  Several changes:
The kitchen is full but the smell of cooking has stopped whetting appetites; it now nauseates but still the neighbors cook. building feet and legs. not long legs but the small and thin, At first I though I liked the lack of punctuation, but as I realized that you did use punctuation, I felt more and more like you should add it everywhere it may be necessary. I see why you leave it out in some areas, but I think it needs it in others. As mentioned. All in all, I really did like this. -- Hide the past! word
-- "The world is not enough- but it's such a perfect place to start" - Garbage - `roguewolf19 looks so Balla. oh and- edit.
-- "The world is not enough- but it's such a perfect place to start" - Garbage - `roguewolf19 looks so Balla. bettah
-- Hide the past! awesome
-- "The world is not enough- but it's such a perfect place to start" - Garbage - `roguewolf19 looks so Balla.  fabulous!
-- If I'm not writing, I'm just sitting here changing oxygen into carbon dioxide. Like a baby. A little shit and piss factory, maybe one day a man. Be a man today, motherfucker. |
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Community News151 400 Warming Christmas And Winter Images*rebeka-anne
 reports, 1d 3h agoA Collection of seasonal art of all mediums and genres, and from artists of all ages and talents from well seasoned experts to beginners. 101 Diversity Feature*nothingbuteverything
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 reports, 1d 11h agoa wonderful collection-photography,digital and traditional works from my friends,from watchers and from people randomly found on dA.enjoy! 68 It is Christmas in the heart...*6igella
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 reports, 1d 20h agoHave a great time everyone and please fav this article so as many people can see the featured works. I would recommend seeing each one and faving them too. 56 Daily Literature Deviations - December 24, 2009=DailyLitDeviations
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