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 Except for the line That coughing laugh which I thought was unnecessary, and an interruption to the flow, it was quite nice and original. I think the picture really added to it, and I love cherries, so you get bonus points for that as well. Maybe, I'd remove the this time in the third line, but that's more of a personal preference than anything else. The repetition at the end really added to it. Anyways, great work overall, it was quite a piece of art.
-- Are you a writer?  This reminds me of Hemingway for some strange reason. Love it.
-- Hide the past!  disagreed, about the coughing laugh thing
-- Music is a product of man and has structure, but its structure cannot have an existence of its own divorced from the behaviour which produces it.  I liked the coughing laugh. I definitely got a picture in my mind (ears?) about what the would look/sound like. Loved the overall feel of it--definitely could see it all happening, so that's bonus points for you. Good stuff
  i like the coughing laugh too, it give it some individuality. you certainly created great imagery, it's like something we've all experienced. good work
-- Chocolate Cows make the best milk Check out my stock at ~cowluva-stock  thanks-- "The world is not enough- but it's such a perfect place to start" - Garbage - `roguewolf19 looks so Balla.  i try...can you tell i don't drink
 -- "The world is not enough- but it's such a perfect place to start" - Garbage - `roguewolf19 looks so Balla. |
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