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hey guys, okay--this will be the last stamp tonight. I SWEAR.
Look--i've read SO MUCH crazy yaoi written by 15 year old girls that i've lost my mind.
Seriously. I love romance, all kinds of romance, gay, straight or bi--but please
please
if you're going to write about relationships, about romance, about sex--wait until you can ascribe real emotions to your scene and your characters.
Mary Sues = ew
Smut is fine--bad smut is annoying as fuck.
Look--i've read SO MUCH crazy yaoi written by 15 year old girls that i've lost my mind.
Seriously. I love romance, all kinds of romance, gay, straight or bi--but please
please
if you're going to write about relationships, about romance, about sex--wait until you can ascribe real emotions to your scene and your characters.
Mary Sues = ew
Smut is fine--bad smut is annoying as fuck.
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my old friend texted my other friend really bad smut she wrote and I wanted to cry, it was so bad. here's why:
1) It was a Mary Sue/Self Insert (SHE'S 13) X That redhead from Bleach
2) It was horrible writing, and most of it wasn't even her own (she was "inspired" by someone else)
3) This just makes me sad, but
she thought a clitoris was a hole
SHE HAD LIKE A PARAGRAPH OF THE BLEACH CARROT DUDE RAMMING HIS "BIG COCK" INTO HER CLITORIS
1) It was a Mary Sue/Self Insert (SHE'S 13) X That redhead from Bleach
2) It was horrible writing, and most of it wasn't even her own (she was "inspired" by someone else)
3) This just makes me sad, but
she thought a clitoris was a hole
SHE HAD LIKE A PARAGRAPH OF THE BLEACH CARROT DUDE RAMMING HIS "BIG COCK" INTO HER CLITORIS